Shawn Albert Shepard
Heuristic Evaluation
"Unclear how the diagrams relate to the text."
"Unclear what the 9 ways are. I'd like to see them numbered."
I think most of the difficulty matching matching text to graphics is because the graphics are poorly labeled. I'm going to relabel the graphics so there is a direct correspondence between the text in the graphics and the text in the paper.
I'm going to number the nine methods so it's easier to recognize them. However, the methods are grouped into five "overload types"; numbering both the types and the methods will be confusing. So, I'm also going to change the types to roman numerals to avoid the confusion.